OK, I have looked at enough Brazilian company websites to recognize the ... Suggestion by Tim Plaehn on 2008-01-15 17:20:57
OK, I have looked at enough Brazilian company websites to recognize the somewhat perverted use of the english language when it is translated from Portuguese. The first step is to get the paragraphs and sentences rewritten so they read like English. Also, delete the stuff that is not important to investors like "It is also plausible that,.....productive chain." Next add some financial information about the company, revenues and profits would be a good start. This is one of the world's greatest companies, I would like to see a write up that does it justice.
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