Avi,
interesting article on what can only be called a complex topic.
A few critiques:
Intro:
- Break this up into several paragraphs.
- What does the company do? This is not clear from intro. Explanation does not have to be long but it should be more detailed than what is currently there.
- What is the difference between virtulization market and thin client market?
Products and Services:
- What percentage of the revenue does each business line generate- pie chart or percentage in parenthesis next to each header.
General:
- At one point you mention that the majority of sales are genearated in this market. Where are the rest of the sales generated?
- Please add a pie chart showing geographical breakdown of revenues.
- Citrix announced its intention to restate its financial astatements after voluntarily investigating its stock option granting practices.
Competition:
- I don't understand your paragraph about Cisco. Why does bying Webx make Cisco look worse relative to Citrix?
- It may be worth mentioning that Microsoft will be releasing its own virtualization solutions in another year.
- Mention VMware. Now that Citrix has entered into the virtulation market, VMware is a major competitior.
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