interesting article on what can only be called a complex topic.
A few critiques:
Intro:
Break this up into several paragraphs.
What does the company do? This is not clear from intro. Explanation does not have to be long but it should be more detailed than what is currently there.
What is the difference between virtulization market and thin client market?
Products and Services:
What percentage of the revenue does each business line generate- pie chart or percentage in parenthesis next to each header.
General:
At one point you mention that the majority of sales are genearated in this market. Where are the rest of the sales generated?
Please add a pie chart showing geographical breakdown of revenues.
Citrix announced its intention to restate its financial astatements after voluntarily investigating its stock option granting practices.
Competition:
I don't understand your paragraph about Cisco. Why does bying Webx make Cisco look worse relative to Citrix?
It may be worth mentioning that Microsoft will be releasing its own virtualization solutions in another year.
Mention VMware. Now that Citrix has entered into the virtulation market, VMware is a major competitior.
Bet you've never seen portfolio analytics like these.