Suggestion by Tim Plaehn on 2008-01-24 17:48:06
I think this article has a little too much jargon and not enough information. What are "combustion units"? I would like to see a description of the company's business in plain english, without all of the company provided jargon. Next, I would like to see some financial information. Revenues, profits, sources of revenue. Is this new technology or old technology the company is selling. What are their growth prospects. I think the business of the company is to clean the emission of coal power plants but it is not clear from the description here. So a little plain language and a good dose of financial information would really help this article.
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