Intro:The intro is the most important part of the article. It is not enough to say what the company does and give a few metrics. The Intro should tell the company's story. What is special about this company. What advantages does it have, what obstacles does it face? What major trends affect its business.
A few things that might be worth mentioning are its used game business.
You may also want to discuss its growth over the last several years. It has grown its number of stores by more than 100% since 2004, due largely to acquisitions. It continues to grow aggressively, although in the US it is now focusing on strip centers because the malls are already saturated with GME stores.
Also talk about its exposure to video game console cycles
Business FinancialsI really like the charts. Don't forget to footnote. Take a look at Toll Brothers for a good example of footnotes. You mention the acquisition here. It is important to tie it to the fact that GME's revenue has increased 4 fold over last 4 years.
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