[edit] Corporate Overview
- Looks good. Start off with your third paragraph then go into the rest.
- Insert a pie chart showing sales by major categories
[edit] Trends and Forces
- I noticed that you mentioned aging populations in your intro. You might want to include it here as well (feel free to borrow from Astra Zeneca). Also feel free to borrow some of the graphs.
[edit] Competition
The data that you included is good. Just make sure that you point out some of the key points. For instance GSK is right behind Pfizer in terms of revenue, but lags way behind in terms of net income. Any idea why GSK's expenses are so high comparatively?
Also GSK has many more products in the pipline than any other pharma company.